The Pony Pixels – an Introduction

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    Askre

    Ah the first comic, well second comic actually technically speaking. I actually cringe a little about it because I did a little cardinal mistake.

    I didn’t really introduce some of the characters too well or show some of their characteristics and Paper Scribbler’s word balloons are too wordy. I’ve really been struggling with keeping the dialogue more precise, it really shows I’m more used to writing stories in a written format than in a comic format.

    I’m trying to fix that and hopefully in the fourth story arc it will show better.

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